It’s a madhouse, but people like it. It is
for kids, teenagers, and adults. This place was so crowed, full of people
everywhere and place that people want to relax. Widely known among the people.
Air was fresh. The wind that crunched through the tree branches that refreshed
me. I found a bench in the shade that no one could disturb me. It has fantastic
and dreamy rides for little cute kids, excited teenagers, and not very
interested adults. Blue, yellow, red balloons were grabbing by children and
their parents. An Enormous Ferris wheel was going around with many people.
People were eating their delicious snacks and foods. They enjoyed multifarious of
rides. Grandiose roller coasters, horrible haunted house, high Viking, and rounded
merry-go-round. Bungee drop falls from seven-teen stories high that might attack
people’s heart. Popping popcorns, layer one upon hamburgers and delicious
hotdogs were grabbing by hungry people.
They began parade with people who
danced brilliantly on the ground. They even smiled nice. They were shaking
their hand here and there along with big yellow bus. In the children’s park;
many children were making fun of each other and play together that they known
each other before. The best part for children is zoo. It was with variety of
animals that could even scared children. Children were looking at animals as
adorable doll. A intrepid children stared at Lion. Huge and scary lions, long necked giraffe, giant elephant, and
adorable kittens. Animals were showing their improved beguilement. The seven years
old boy was finding his mother and father that he crying here and there. After
he found her parents he showed nice smile to everyone. In the dark night all
the lights off and no one else is here except silent. But it opens after the
bright sun rises. Many color of balloons, shows, performance, delicious foods
and exciting rides. It is a place that has dream and hope. Anyone can come this
place. This place is an amusement park.
I love your writing! You describe the place very well,roller coaster, haunted house, viking, and merry-go-round. Popping popcorn... How cute~ haha. It's like I'd been there myself! I wish to have one of those ballon... I love them... How sad when the seven-years-old boy lost his parents.T^T I'm so happy that he found his parent and I like your sentence, "It is a place that has dream and hope." So touch~
ReplyDeleteWonki Hong Period 6
After reading your story, I miss the time when I was young going to the amusement park with parents. I really miss those moments and the fun I had. Your descriptions are so cute, and I love them. There are many emotions in the story and you vary them very well. Good job and keep it up.
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